Twin lovers,
seductively smooth,
whispering encouraging endearments
to numb fingers tracing their curve.
Crystal bearer
deceivingly clear,
weighing iron regrets
upon thought-burdened bodies
Lone drummer
relentlessly advancing,
beating steady messages
for masterpiece fragments dancing along.
Twin lovers,
seductively clear,
relentlessly deceiving encouragements,
to masterpiece dancers dreaming.














Comments
in the first stanza i picture two people, who may or may not be friends/lovers simply being there for each other, always being able to count on one another.
in the second stanza i picture one of these people betraying the other, and feeling incredibly guilty
in the third stanza i see the betrayer begging for forgiveness, to his/her friend/lover
and in the final stanza i see that true love/friendship can overcome simple betrayles in life
hmm i know i'm probably not right, but igave it a shot... it's a very good piece by the way
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